Applied Bunch of Special Means - Article is likely about a notable topic but is incomprehensible as written. It was almost certainly created by someone whose first language is not English. Even the title may be a poor translation. -Ad Orientem (talk) 20:10, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
4 O'Clock Club - this article is quite a mess. The characters are there but they need more information that actually tells you more about what they are about. It's difficult because it's not like there are a large amount of people out there who watch this particular programme and who can actually clean the article up. It just looks a lot like fan editing and it needs a clean up as it doesn't clearly dictate what happens in the series, exactly. Emirates123 (talk) 20:16, 5 February 2014 (UTC)
Economy of Switzerland - Tagged for cleanup with the rationale, "many unsubstantiated claims." Additional sections in the article are tagged for improvements. Northamerica1000(talk) 08:58, 8 January 2014 (UTC)
CPU design – copy editing, formatting, bare url, and it's suggested that extensive lists could be converted to prose. Northamerica1000(talk) 08:22, 8 January 2014 (UTC)
Nissan Motor Company - I did my maiden cleanup (so to speak) at this page. Of course, it took much longer than I thought, will probably never be finished, and led to more work. BsBsBs (talk) 06:34, 18 December 2013 (UTC)
List of FIFA Club World Cup broadcasters - the majority of the citations are referring to the UEFA Champions League instead. As a result, the majority of the information in the table is incorrect. Major cleanup needed. Digifiend (talk) 00:20, 18 December 2013 (UTC)
Centennial Park (Champaign), needs wording, clean up formatting of sources, and general fixes. We cannot just assume it's Champaign, Illinois. Tinton5 (talk) 22:09, 8 December 2013 (UTC)
Robotics Institute - Needs formatting and layout cleanup, including the addition of bullet points to lists in the article. Northamerica1000(talk) 00:07, 30 November 2013 (UTC)
Shuddhananda Bharati – peacock words, gibberish and an inappropriately extensive commercial section. Toccata quarta (talk) 13:40, 29 November 2013 (UTC)
Shit - Has a cleanup tag placed in June 2011, with no specific cleanup rationale provided. Immediate cleanup matters from my assessment here involve copy editing and adding sources. Northamerica1000(talk) 09:08, 29 November 2013 (UTC)
Baz Mohammad Mubariz - where to start? No paragraphs, no sections, no sources, no wikilinks, no indication of importance or notability. Might even be a speedy. MaxBrowne (talk) 16:02, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
I've performed some preliminary cleanup. The article would certainly benefit from improved sourcing and further copy editing. Northamerica1000(talk) 08:53, 29 November 2013 (UTC)
I did some minor copy editing. The article still needs more sources. Bold Edits (talk) 19:37, 16 December 2013 (UTC)
Merlin Entertainments - I just fixed a few glaring syntax errors (like two headings not having the same number of equals signs (=) on both sides, and a few wiki-links with a similar problem of not having the same number of brackets on both sides), but I'm sure there are many more. Most of these errors are in the "Operations" section". Of course, that section also has no citations at all... --V2Blast (talk) 00:22, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
Wallace v. Jaffree - Facts of the case as well as the opinion of the case are all in the introduction, not segmented into subheads. Cleanup needed. Amberkilloran (talk) 02:05, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
Jovanka Broz - even though she died today,details of her death are not included in the article,lots of statements need reliable sources etc. Major cleanup needed --Killuminator (talk) 19:43, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
Barmaley Fountain-This monument was recently restored,the article needs a photograph too.I would do it myself,but I am an amateur Wikipedian -.- --Killuminator (talk) 19:06, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
Sierra Madre Ground Warbler - I created the article because one on this bird had not been created yet. If someone could help with adding more information and material that would be great. Andise1 (talk) 06:58, 11 September 2013 (UTC)
Narayan Dutt Shrimali - An article about an Indian astrologer. Please check for notability and consider deletion. It has lots of material with no citations. - Kenfyre (talk) 10:07, 10 September 2013 (UTC)
I've removed the unsourced promotional content and stubbed it; the subject seems notable enough when I tried searching. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 13:31, 10 September 2013 (UTC)
B. F. Skinner - Wierd formatting, possible inaccuracy, and a lot of section moving needed. Also might consider a semi-protect for a *lot* of vandalism. Kingsocarso (talk) 22:16, 7 September 2013 (UTC)
Fooding - Several cleanup issues, including unformatted lists and many bare urls, both in the article and in the references section. Northamerica1000(talk) 08:06, 7 September 2013 (UTC)
Ducati V-twin motorcycles - Tagged as being primarily in list format that may be better-presented in prose style; the "Bevel gear driven valves" section tagged as too long and as possibly needing rewriting. Northamerica1000(talk) 05:36, 3 September 2013 (UTC)
Chinese space program - The "History and recent developments" section is tagged as needing copy editing and to possibly be rewritten. Northamerica1000(talk) 05:05, 3 September 2013 (UTC)
Lowell Milken - The cleanup banner has been on this page since April 2013 regarding additional editors to qualify for a neutral point of view. There are also references that require proper sourcing. Perhaps some other editors can attend to the references on this page? Sarahkeen (talk) 21:16, 26 August 2013 (UTC)
Hiv impact of education in ethiopia - Very essayish, needs extreme copyediting and retitling. Probably should also be expanded to worldwide scope, or at least a larger region than just Ethiopia.-- Brainy J ~✿~ (talk) 13:23, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
List of haunted locations, especially Haunted locations in the US – Has numerous amounts of speculative information from various unreliable paranormal websites. Also prone to drive-by additions, need a massive cleanup and removal of such content based on unreliable sources; watchlisting will also help. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 12:04, 19 August 2013 (UTC)
Ram Revilla, already a poorly written article, has been bombarded with massive amounts of unsourced detail that is probably a violation of WP:BLP. I recommend the page be stripped of all the huge cruft, with the needed information carefully reinserted. Beerest355Talk 17:15, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
Removed some unsourced trivia and obituary-like information. Also rearranged the sections and did some minor formatting. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 13:00, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
Rasoolpur needs an assessment of notability, fact checking, NPOV and citations.Kenfyre 17:37, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
I've cleaned it up, but managed to find two not so good sources for it. It goes back to a stub. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 10:56, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
Roulette needs to be checked for mathematical accuracy: there are numerous errors.
Silva Method - Grammar needs fixing. Article is more about José Silva than the Silva Method. Content about the method itself is mostly not encyclopaedic (e.g. list of countries). The Navbox template adds little value. Stelio (talk) 09:10, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
Peninsular War - I'm trying to cleanup the many unreferenced paragraphs by some time but there a plenty of work to do. Some help before a GA nomination would be great. Reiftyr (talk) 07:32, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
Fred Newman (actor) - Clean up needed in body of article. Grammar, formatting, etc. Tinton5 (talk) 01:15, 19 June 2013 (UTC)
Page has been fixed up. Tinton5 (talk) 17:38, 7 October 2013 (UTC)
Macedonian hip hop - organization into sections, copy editing, better sourcing, currently has no inline citations. Northamerica1000(talk) 20:40, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
Sub-replacement fertility#Tempo effect - 'Tempo effect' is 4 times as long as other sections and is overly explanatory while still not being very clear.
Bug Juice - Page formatting is a hodge podge of confusion. Strange attempts to table, with no regard for wiki formatting. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 05:55, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
John Enos III - Page is a mess. The entire lead is one big clump of info, which needs to be trimmed and layout better. Tinton5 (talk) 21:35, 19 April 2013 (UTC)
Attempted to lessen the one-sided, grandiloquent writing by (hopefully) removing personal observation, interpretation, and synthesis. Not perfect by any stretch. More help is welcomed! :D Cyphoidbomb (talk) 05:55, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
Category:Articles with incorrect citation syntax - As part of the migration to Lua-based citations, we have been able to track and identify many additional types of incomplete and malformed citations. This has led to a backlog of pages that are newly recognized as needing citation cleanup. Any friendly wikignomes that want to help out would certainly be appreciated. Dragons flight (talk) 00:42, 6 April 2013 (UTC)
2005–present: Paramount today - This section of the Paramount Pictures article is almost entirely unsourced, as indicated by the "citation needed" tags added in July 2012. The entire section needs rewriting. Editors may find the following articles useful as sources. [1][2][3][4][5]NinaSpezz (talk) 17:56, 5 April 2013 (UTC)
Greenville Christian School - Would benefit from copy editing and layout work to better organize its content. Also tagged as needing more links to other articles. Northamerica1000(talk) 01:26, 7 March 2013 (UTC)
Had a go at it. I think that someone else may have already gone through and attempted Wikification. Chri$topher 12:04, 26 April 2013 (UTC)
K'Nex pieces - Has 3 sections that are significantly overly detailed and would benefit from reduction into an encyclopedic style. Needs reliable sources. Northamerica1000(talk) 01:22, 7 March 2013 (UTC)
Hôtel Le Bristol Paris - Primarily in list format, the characteristics section in particular would benefit from conversion from a list into a paragraph. More sources would also be an improvement. Northamerica1000(talk) 23:24, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
Hotklub - An unsourced article that would benefit from copy editing, layout clean-up and sources. Northamerica1000(talk) 23:15, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
Update: This article was deleted in September. Digifiend (talk) 14:03, 18 December 2013 (UTC)
Eliza Taylor-Cotter - General clean up of reference formatting and page formatting is needed. Grammar and punctuation as well. Tinton5 (talk) 21:52, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
I worked on grammar and punctuation along with others and that seems to be handled.Coaster92 (talk) 22:28, 26 March 2013 (UTC)
I copyedited the whole thing, formatted all of the sources properly, added an infobox, started the talk page with a header that it was under the scope of WikiProject Visual arts, and added a stub tag at the bottom. öBrambleberryofRiverClan 16:18, 28 February 2013 (UTC)
New Jersey Turnpike - needs additional sources and formatting improvements. In addition, consistency with naming conventions such as the word "exit" (like in exit 5), the "E" should be lowercase in the body and lead. Footnote number 22 needs to be replaced with a more reliable source. Tinton5 (talk) 21:37, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
Garden State Parkway - needs extra sources, formatting improvements, and consistency with naming conventions throughout. Tinton5 (talk) 21:37, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
Belt Parkway - extra sources are needed, especially in "history" section. Tinton5 (talk) 21:37, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
Skye Townsend - needs additional sources and minor formatting improvements, also needs more categories. Tinton5 (talk) 21:37, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
Cleaned up a bit, and added categories. Tinton5 (talk) 21:33, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
Dingo - the body is great and I can fix any little errors, but I have no idea how to tackle a monster like the lead. öBrambleberryofRiverClan 16:10, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
Somerset House - much of the prose is essay-like, and in need of verifiable sources.Trillig (talk) 14:34, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
Shahkot, India, as many problems with grammar and formatting. Tinton5 (talk) 01:51, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
– I've performed page cleanup and some copy editing; the article would still benefit from more copy editing. Northamerica1000(talk) 14:54, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
I've cleaned up grammar and syntax and removed the copy edit tag. I don't know how to show a strike-through of this project here.Coaster92 (talk) 01:52, 21 March 2013 (UTC)
50 Cent: Bulletproof- Plot section particularly needs rewriting, as well as needing more sourcing
Chach Nama and related articles - article and related ones regarding a chronicle of 7th-century India. Though listed as low-importance, there are abundant resources regarding this period of history and the articles could use better sourcing, restructuring, and content additions. dci | TALK 16:07, 24 February 2013 (UTC)
Fish ball - Significant clean-up opportunities here at this time. Northamerica1000(talk) 14:44, 24 February 2013 (UTC) I did the best I could to edit thisJimnChina (talk) 13:17, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
Indian Institute of Planning and Management - cleanup tagged since December 2009. NPOv issues:favors IIPM in almost all topics. Advert templates. Controversy section and dubious citations. Primary sources. Tall claims.--Nizil (talk) 21:26, 15 February 2013 (UTC)
Law of value - A subject of extreme WP:OWN as shown by the talk page. One of the largest articles on Wikipedia and is likely filled with original research. It needs to be condensed, made understandable and neutral.--Neoconfederate (talk) 00:25, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
Success Academy Charter Schools - This article is one of the largest articles as well and is bloated with excessive detail. It needs to be summarized and copy-edited. --Neoconfederate (talk) 00:25, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
Boo to You Too! Winnie the Pooh – Incomprehensible. Problems compounded by personal lack of knowledge of the movie, and inexperienced editors. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 00:42, 15 January 2013 (UTC)
Re-wrote the entire article. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 16:52, 31 January 2013 (UTC)
Heriots Cricket Club – Needs better organization and the addition of sections, disambiguation in some of its links, and currently has no inline citations. Northamerica1000(talk) 09:14, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
List of Tamagotchi releases – Needs a complete rewrite. Article written as if an advertisement, information is not well organized, and some points are difficult to understand if not already knowledgeable of the topic. Timeraner (talk) 06:53, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
Rebbie Jackson - Article has no references whatsoever, grammar is all over the place, incorrect facts, even lists albums that never existed! --Meluvseveryone (talk) 04:50, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
Ian Humphreys - No longer plays for Ulster Rugby Team.
Association football tactics and skills - Article really needs a very thorough clean up to meed current wikipedia standards, than what it used to be. There are images that need to be substituted too. TheOriginalSoni (talk) 19:39, 9 December 2012 (UTC)
Poor man's copyright – This article is full of original uncited research. Would benefit from a complete work-over to make sure what is said is factually backed. 12:57, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
Lensman series – A long article that lacks appropriate inline citations. The plot section would benefit from abbreviation, and the article contains too much unsourced fancruft information. Northamerica1000(talk) 12:19, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
Rongpa – This article about an Indian village would benefit from being edited for content, context, and formatting. While informative, it lacks citations.
Australian Army Cadets – To much information. The article is somewhat spammed with excess information which can be deemed as irrelevant to the general public. Sources not states throughout the majority of the article.
Toonami (Asia) This Article is about an upcoming television channel in South-East Asia. Help me to match it with Wikipedia Wiki Verification.
Article removed. 4DHS (talk) 06:25, 8 November 2012 (UTC)
I removed the strike-out that was previously in place for this article above; the article exists (appears to have been recreated) and remains in need of work. Northamerica1000(talk) 01:31, 7 March 2013 (UTC)
Letter of credit – Much uncited material. Confusing. Self-published sources. It's difficult to find good sources; Google searches turn up Investopedia, sites promoting various financial products, "standby letter of credit" scams, and other junk sources. It's a real topic, but probably needs to be cited to some offline book. This needs attention by a financial professional. John Nagle (talk) 04:56, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
UVB-76 – It was ok before but recently editors have been adding information about the station's day-to-day business which is really not that interesting or notable and reads more like a logbook than an article. CodeCat (talk) 12:14, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
Puffed grain – No inline citations. 3 Further reading section entries exist that may possibly be usable to improve the article. Northamerica1000(talk) 13:26, 15 October 2012 (UTC)
Pizza delivery – Lead requires expansion. Needs more inline citations per "citation needed" tags.
Nearly 3x length of lead. Could still use some work, but much better than what it was. ComfyKem (talk) 18:26, 30 May 2013 (UTC)
History of pizza – Several clean-up matters tagged atop the article.
Sicilian pizza – Would benefit from expansion. Has exactly one source as of this post.
The article's sourcing has been improved, and it has been slightly expanded. Northamerica1000(talk) 23:58, 22 August 2013 (UTC)
Bondo (putty) Generally sloppy. Only one citation. Very biased tone. Information about the product is very limited and does not include information about other products in the Bondo line (fiberglass filler, plastic filler, etc.) or any history on the brand. Not much information on how it works or why it is used (it is also extensively used for sculpture and modification of consumer goods). Doesn't even contain a link to the product web page. Chrisbrl88 (talk) 09:56, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
– I added a few sources to the article. Northamerica1000(talk) 11:47, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
Rue21 Generally sloppy, reads like an advertisement. JEMdev (talk) 07:21, 9 July 2012 (UTC)
– The layout has been cleaned-up, and the article has been copy-edited to reduce promotional tone. Northamerica1000(talk) 20:44, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
Political culture – Would benefit from general cleanup, copy editing, more inline citations and better organization. Northamerica1000(talk) 14:27, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
Moshi Monsters – The article is in desperate need of wikification, and from a little research seems incomplete. User:Bilky_asko ☞ Talk Pagé 09:30, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
VEISHEA – An historic festival at Iowa State University founded in 1922. Needs copy-editing, the addition of inline citations and general clean-up. Northamerica1000(talk) 07:36, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
Jayne Mansfield - Citation cleanup using cite templates, copyedit to conform to MOS, and oversight by someone familiar with Hollywood biographies. Aditya(talk • contribs) 04:42, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
Narayan Kaji Shrestha - BLP needs significant general editing and additional citations. Could benefit from someone knowledgeable in Nepal and its politics. Taroaldo (talk) 08:08, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
Poverty in Tanzania – Needs significant copy editing, it's written like an essay and needs more sources and inline citations. Northamerica1000(talk) 01:23, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
– Layout is cleaned up. Still needs work. Northamerica1000(talk) 14:22, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
– Cleaned up the layout. The article still needs more sources. Northamerica1000(talk) 00:38, 7 June 2012 (UTC)
Raw water - Cleanup required, several links just copied in and written to sound like an advertisement.
– The article has been cleaned-up by other users and in some edits I have done. The article would still benefit from more sources. Northamerica1000(talk) 00:58, 7 June 2012 (UTC)
Fair trade coffee – The article would benefit from copy editing, layout cleanup and more specific sourcing. There's some information on the article's talk page regarding the latter within this comment. Northamerica1000(talk) 14:54, 25 May 2012 (UTC)
– The article has been cleaned up. It would still benefit from copy editing and better organization. Northamerica1000(talk) 12:45, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
I like the idea of cleaning up this - if no one else is going to I'll take a look over the next few weeks (will take me a while to do it right)-- 🍺 Antiqueightconfer 12:23, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
Metabolic window - Very badly constructed and poorly written. Sources listed by last name in the article, but not present in Notes or References section. Looks like the original writer wrote one thing and someone else "updated" it contradicting the original. It's just sloppy. Milhisfan (talk) 09:26, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
University of Colorado School of Medicine - Too many external links (to the UC Denver website) within the article, no reference list, and reads like an advertisement.
– The article has been cleaned up as of the time of this post. It would benefit from further copy editing. Northamerica1000(talk) 13:43, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
Ike & Tina Turner- I tagged this a while back as having multiple issues, the templates have been removed but it's not much better as far as I can see. Sloppily written and poorly researched with barely any citations. I stand by my comments in the talk sectionKaleeyed (talk) 11:30, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
Solomon Burke - How long have you got? Going to be a Herculean task this one, it really needs hacking back and surplus information moving to other articles. It's out of control. Kaleeyed (talk) 12:15, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
– Cleaned up. A long article with 500 inline citations at this time. The article would still benefit from copy editing. Northamerica1000(talk) 13:35, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
Burton upon Trent I just looked at this article and did a bit of rearranging, but I think it's struggling a bit and could do with some help. This could be a really great article but at the moment it's pretty weakly written and lacks some research. Thought I'd draw some people's attention to it. Kaleeyed (talk) 18:11, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
UK miners' strike (1984–1985) – This article is full of OR/POV and unsourced sections and statements. There seems to be a massive left-wing bias in this article and I feel it needs thorough scrutiny. Thank you. Christian1985 (talk) 21:58, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
Anticuchos – No references. Would benefit from copy-editing and better organization.
Anti-social behaviour – Could use copy-editing for cohesion and to clean-up grammatical choppiness. Needs more references.
E-commerce payment system – Has only three inline citations; needs more. May contain original research.
– Cleaned up. Needs more citations and copy editing. Northamerica1000(talk) 13:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
Hair museum – Needs expansion; has seven listed sources that could be used to expand the article with inline citations.
– Cleaned up.
K L University – Article would benefit from copy-editing for cohesion; prose is choppy. References section needs copy-editing. Article needs more inline citations
– Cleaned up. Could still use more sources and copy editing. Northamerica1000(talk) 12:56, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
Madison Symmetric Torus – Article has only one reference, would benefit from copy-editing, and may contain original research. The article would also benefit from some reduction and better summarization of technical information. Bare URLs need cleaning-up.
Occupy Ottawa – Needs more references and inline citations. Could use better organization and copy-editing for cohesion. Currently has no images.
Pan-American Conference – Tables need layout formatting and clean-up. Only has one reference/inline citation. No assigned WikiProjects on talk page.
Salal Hydroelectric Power Station – Primarily in list format; conversion to prose would improve the article. References section needs copy-editing. Needs inline citations.
Ukrainian culture – Art section is very long, somewhat choppy, would benefit from copy-editing and formatting. Other areas are also choppy; consolidation of information into paragraphs would be an improvement. Article has many empty sections that need to be populated with sourced information. Bare URLs need cleaning up. Needs more references and inline citations.
Systems for Nuclear Auxiliary Power - Badly formatted article; many external link documents that could be used as references. Believe that experts should look the article over.Graham1973 (talk) 11:48, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
– I've done some preliminary clean-up to the page's layout and added the "expert attention requested" template. Northamerica1000(talk) 04:11, 16 March 2012 (UTC)
The Sopranos: The whole article is unbelievably laboured throughout. Extent of content in Info' box has been discussed previously, and has been debated extensively but to no avail, thanks to the aggressive participation of non-registered IPs. Suggest partial protection before attempting editing on this article. A project on which I would then be more than pleased to participate.
Have you tried requesting protection at WP:RFPP? -- Ϫ 02:04, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
మూస:DeindentI have just put in a request for Temporary semi-protection. I should like to thank El duderino, and everyone else who has helped on The Sopranos since 25 February 2012 (UTC)--- Gareth Griffith-Jones (talk) 10:45, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
Persistent sockpuppetry. Repeated deletion of sourced material by new editors. Persistent vandalism. I have had help from the Wikipedia:Cleanup Project (since February 25) and I should welcome your help in maintaining this article. Thank you,Gareth Griffith-Jones (talk) 11:06, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
Declined – Not enough recent disruptive activity to justify protection. Jayjg (talk) 03:36, 11 March 2012 (UTC)
China National Tea Museum The link to the museum seems to lead to a dead page (but I cannot read the Chinese script to work out what the matter is) Jackiespeel (talk) 22:25, 15 February 2012 (UTC)
Rail transport in Russia – Lede is short. Tagged for tone and neutrality issues. Information could be better-organized into sections and subsections.
Rail transport in Queensland – Lede is very short. Much content is in list format; conversion to prose may benefit the article. Additional inline citations are needed.
Bank of Hawaii – History section is very choppy, could use organization and consolidation into paragraphs. Most of the article is within its "History" section; better organization with new sections may be an improvement. Much of the content is missing inline citations.
Quarantine technology – Unreferenced. Citations and clarification needed. Primarily in list format; conversion to prose may be an improvement. Article tagged as providing insufficient context.
Duane Hagadone – Lede is very short. List formatting could use conversion to prose.
Halton Hills Public Library – Some sections are very long without any inline citations, could use some reduction. Article has no inline citations. "Assets" section could use rewriting to clarify the content.
Hai Sing Catholic School – Prose is choppy, much of the article is in list format, which may be better as prose. The verifiability of the article is tagged as disputed. Unreferenced as of this post.
*Jeanie Johnston - "Personal communication" as a reference. Would someone please look at (and probably revert) this edit of Jeanie Johnston[6] I would explain that <ref>{{Personal communication, Aiseanna Mara Teoranta}}</ref> is not acceptable, (and it is tagged as such), but in the light of the reason given for the changes: (I reverted some of user Lugnad's changes, as he or she deleted withouth comment several unfavourable, but researched and sourced facts about the ship. Also fixed some typos.) It might be better received from someone other than I. Just to add, I have no idea what changes of mine are being referred to. Thanks, Lugnad (talk) 11:34, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for responding Lugnad (talk) 18:31, 10 February 2012 (UTC)
I've chopped the pers. comm. ref and claim. Bet it comes back. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:51, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
Football hooliganism – Could use some copy editing. Some sections need more references. Some of the references need better formatting. The article would benefit from some of the information being condensed. Northamerica1000(talk) 06:44, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
Stormworld – The article has significant lists that could be changed to prose. Could use more references. Could use images. Northamerica1000(talk) 06:31, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
Open University of Sudan - A user that seems to be related to this university added lots of content. First I've rollbacked it, than I've replaced and fixed it as a minor layout copyedit. All this content is related to this university and may be useful but I still have the doubt that it's wroten as a sort of Brochure. --Dэя-Бøяg 21:23, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
– Information very likely copied and pasted, or written verbatim per University literature has been removed. The article is now a stub. Northamerica1000(talk) 08:00, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
– The article appears to be cleaned up as of this post. Northamerica1000(talk) 11:40, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
1984 in organized crime – No lede section. Empty "births" section. Unreferenced. Needs more references. Would benefit from summaries preceding the list information in its sections.
Early classical guitar recordings – No lede section. Some of the content in the "History of early classical guitar recordings" section may be better rewritten in a list format.
Eco Marine Power – An article about a company that develops and markets environmentally friendly power and propulsion systems for ships and other vessels. The article is tagged as written like an advertisement, could use some rewriting. I added a few references to the article, which could be used for more inline citations.
– The article has been cleaned up. It would still benefit from copy editing. Northamerica1000(talk) 11:46, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
Economy of Cuba – The "Public Facilities" and "Other statistics" sections are entirely in list format. Article could use more inline citations, references.
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Declined – Not enough recent disruptive activity to justify protection. Jayjg (talk) 03:36, 11 March 2012 (UTC)
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